Tried my hand at writing a detective story...i know its trash..but just lemme know how bad...i.e does it make u wanna throw up ..or does it just give ya a mild stomach ache. commentz please ..
ch1:
Detective Hugo Peniz frowned as he slowly lifted the wet condom from the floor using his forceps. It Was a scented one..although it seemed like a mixtue of gooseberry and grape...it was most likely to be a grape one ... as that was the most popular flavour in this part of town.It brought back so many memories.. !! The distant chime of the wall clock awakened him from his lewd wonderland. Damm...he thought... i gotta stay focussed!! He observed the dangling peice of latex carefully , He could almost smell the heat .. the killer couldnt have gone far....
ch2:
This was the third case of this kind in the past two weeks. The previous two victims had been killed the same way , but what was so different about these cases was the way they had been murdered. No sireee.. this wasnt your traditional hit n run killer...this was the work of a pro.The victims were all found naked and cold , with a large chunk of sausage stuffed up their asses.. but all with a satisfied expression on their faces. "kinky bastard"..he said to himself as he observed the pale white corpse lying by the poolside in front of him."Robert"...he shouted... "i want a full post mortem of this shit ".."gimme all you've got "!!
"yes sir"..was the reply."i'll get onto it .pronto"
Hugo peniz's eyes lit up ..and a sly smirk slid across his face .."i'm gonna get you this time ...Doc.Cock...yes i am ....!!"
p.s:
errr....this is where the boredom creeps in .. lemme know if yer interested in me continuing with this shit !! ciao..
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